For your first flash, I am very impressed. Great Audio, Smooth Animations, Great art, Original idea.
I have to give you mad props!
This is a good start if anything. If anything, you need to really work on your art style. It seems too "square". What I mean is that it looks like a very young person drew it in paint. Granted some of it was good looking, but taking the time to truly evolve your art style into something much more detailed and fuller will definitely make your animations much cleaner and prettier. I'm not sure what your method of drawing is but I suggest maybe investing some money into this if you can if not invest the time and effort to make it work if you can't spend money.
Sound was very clean. No clipping in the music or sound effects. Everything seemed to be the same audio level. Didn't have any problems there. Always a plus.
For the animation I found it to be very smooth. Very little to no chopping or clipping. Good job there. I liked the idea of the story, but had very little plot to it. You should look into making it into something that will allow the audience to connect with. Give the flash a sense of emotion and engage your audience with a mood instead of just pure combat. You see too many combat style animations these days. It just feels like I'm watching another damn Dragonball Z animation.
Overall, I see potential and say keep pushing forward. Develop your story. Add emotion besides fighting. Take the time to make your art evolve into something much fuller as it has potential. I thin its a start. Not the greatest, not the best. I say it was worth it if you learned something from the experience.
Thanks for the feedback dude. I do plan on adding an intrigueing storyline that I have planned out and it will be full of emotion, trust me on that one. My art is "square"? Ha I can see what you mean. If you read my quote under my profile pic it says "I'm not an artist by any means" and it's true. I'm really not. Not sure if I ever will be. But I will try harder to add more detail/depth to my characters next time.
I thought this flash was very smooth for being done in a day. Easy to follow, not like there was anything to really follow here anyways. I got a good laugh out of it. Fan of the Apocalypse Please series so just made me ramped for more again.
Not bad for a days work. Clean, smooth, and a good laugh.
Top notch man!
I have to give ya mad props!
I can hear the bass perfectly and it's not often I get songs from Newgrounds that really make me turn my speakers overdrive option on!
Hope to hear more!
Great Feel man. I liked it!
I liked it a lot. Just seems like the guitar was a bit too synthesized. I would love to help ya out. As I said on your Orange Enemy Song, when I'm fighting a boss, I would love to get that rush of energy and excitement. Congrats you nailed it!
Just needs a bit of a touch-up with the guitar, but after listening to this for a few loops, I'm getting used to the guitar. I'm tempted to almost go play a few old RPG's now just for some of the boss music lol.
Yeah, guitar is certainly not my strong point. I play the piano so I'm stuck with garageband's software + amp simulator -_- lol.
Yeah let me know some ideas for guitars or if/when we could collab or something, I'm really a keyboard guy so guitar is pretty foreign to me. Hehe.
Thanks for the review!
Ok, I've heard enough...
I'm done. I swear my friend. I'm going backwards through your music. You and I are going to do this. We are going to collab. I will drive to your house and wait on your lawn if I have to! (wouldn't be hard)
Lol, sorry, stalker status :P
Great sound. I definitely felt that aquatic/tundra feeling. The echo's almost helped it give it a sense of being inside a cavern. I enjoy it.
Go away stalker XD
Seriously though, we should definitely collab. It'd be great to collab with someone who can do some really good guitar work, I think we'd complement each other perfectly. Send me a PM or something and we can work it out!
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